Wednesday, November 29, 2006

A story

A 55 word story written on other blog for a friendly contest.

Scene 1

“No Capt. Subodh, Don’t”
“Sorry Sir, I can’t do this to him, It’s our Bopu” replied in a loud voice…… With tears in eyes “My Bopu Sir”

Scene 2
“Capt. Bopanna Ponnaccha, don’t worry, you’re are okay, there is no shelling now”
With pain and anguish “Subodh, I know you will come back for me”

3 comments:

Harsha S Rao said...

Check this out...I got it as a fwd (55 word stories):

SAY SOMETHING

The subway lurched, throwing her into his arms.

He's strong, protective, loving, she thought. We'll marry at a seaside resort and have four beautiful children.

He lifted her up and smiled. I'll always be faithful. When we're old, we'll travel the world together.

The train slowed. She moved to the door.

"Thanks."

"Don't mention it."

Chris Orcutt

Mount Vernon, NY


AT THE AUTOPSY

"Victim's blood is completely drained, apparently through two small puncture wounds in the neck," said the coroner.

"Hey ... you don't suppose it's, you know, the real deal?" asked his assistant.

"No, just some psycho."

"You sure?"

They stared at each other for a moment, then burst out laughing-but stopped when the corpse laughed, too.

Ross Lesko

Lakewood, OH

ALEX AND ADAM

Alex, an aged almsman, articulated an afterthought.

"Always address agnostics amiably and answer atheists affectionately."

Adam, another aged almsman, addressed Alex's absurd aphorism, asking, "And after an apocalypse?"

Alex alluringly assumed an agreeable air and answered Adam: "Apocalypse and afflatus are amazingly abstract areas ... affection and amiability accomplish ample acquiescence and alleviate anger."

Adam agreed.

Jeremiah Jacques

Asheville, NC

INSIDE OUT

They had known each other a few years.

She was nice. He knew she liked him.

But she was just average-looking. He couldn't settle for that.

One weekend, she asked him to the movies. She was intelligent, funny, easy to be with.

After four months of dating, she became a stunning beauty.

John Bassi

Santa Maria

Chitra said...

@ Harsha : Alex and Adam; an amazing anecdote !

Guru said...

they all are nice... i dint know this thing until i participated.. it is good though...